Talk:Orbit

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Reverting revision 13:39, 2 January 2024

Thanks for joining the wiki! Had a couple thoughts on your edit -

  • Line 1: "Crafts circle on the elliptical line..." seemed unnecessary or maybe in the wrong place - consider rewording and/or moving it in a future edit
  • Line 66: "70km" the page is a bit more legible with that space there
  • Line 76: "A high orbit..." seemed fairly self-evident - it's correct, but it's also not necessary.
  • Line 94: "these are exact values" is kind of true - the values in the given table are the exact values for some orbit, but they aren't the values for every orbit because each orbit is unique.
  • Line 122: "A kerbal is..." - This is true, but it's not necessary for this particular section.

Appreciate your help, and stay bold!

- Anerdw (talk) 09:12, 3 January 2024 (UTC)