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+ | I found out the text here is identical to the "about" in the official KSP website. Also, the "we" used in the text refers to Squad. I agree with [[User:Grijze Pilion|Grijze Pilion]]. This article is written in Squad's perspective. I think it would be better to re-write this article to make it look like it is giving information rather than letting Squad say something here. --[[User:Deepspacecreeper|Deepspacecreeper]] 16:50, November 7 2014 (PST) | ||
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This article seems rather biased. I suggest re-writing it in a less promotional style. --[[User:Grijze Pilion|Grijze Pilion]] ([[User talk:Grijze Pilion|talk]]) 08:59, 12 August 2013 (CDT) | This article seems rather biased. I suggest re-writing it in a less promotional style. --[[User:Grijze Pilion|Grijze Pilion]] ([[User talk:Grijze Pilion|talk]]) 08:59, 12 August 2013 (CDT) |
Revision as of 00:49, 8 November 2014
This whole thing is copied from the official website
I found out the text here is identical to the "about" in the official KSP website. Also, the "we" used in the text refers to Squad. I agree with Grijze Pilion. This article is written in Squad's perspective. I think it would be better to re-write this article to make it look like it is giving information rather than letting Squad say something here. --Deepspacecreeper 16:50, November 7 2014 (PST)
Wrong writing style?
This article seems rather biased. I suggest re-writing it in a less promotional style. --Grijze Pilion (talk) 08:59, 12 August 2013 (CDT)