Thanks for noticing (sorry, slow to reply). I'd greatly appreciated any specific critical feedback too. I feel like I'm floating in a bit of a vacuum here (heh), community wise, being new-ish to the game and with apparently no senior oversight on the Wiki, currently.
For example, I've ended up duplicating a lot of information on each of the radiator pages (i.e. the "core cooling" sections, like this), which I'm conscious might be neater and easier to modify in future if it were exclusively on the Radiator page. But then it didn't seem like normal Wiki etiquette to to just have a line telling readers to go to a different page (rather than just including it, or depending on their own initiative to click through to investigate).